rachel eaw

i think that is the best poem i have ever read in my whole life :elephant:

hey that is a very good poem i think its very serious stuff i like the rhyming, nice touch anyway ,keep writing

its like a tiger but i sort of made it up

this is brilliant how did u get the idea for it i wish i could write as well as u keep writing

i don't mean to nag but u spelt my name wrong

hey this is good ,tell your sister she should keep writing

i REALLY like this poem i think it has had a lot of thought put into it it must have taken you ages well anyway, it's perfect so don't stop ...

i thought this was amazing! the style is great and the words are perfect u write ten times better then me can you look at my work on other poetry ...

hey this is good , keep writing

thanx every1 for the tips i'll usre them next time

thanx but i think ALONE is better